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الموضوع: my Loneliness

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    افتراضي my Loneliness

    [align=left]i've wasted my time looking for someone to hold
    and before i know it i've became old
    i were like a Ghost no body can see me
    i was holding a hope to find who'll save me
    my heart was tearing apart crying so badly
    and my soul has lost inside the sadness ocean the deadly
    i kept watching the people with a sad eyes
    i kept shedding my tears and raising my head to the skies
    looking for an angel who'll save me from my sad life
    i've lost my hope and so my desire to stay alive
    my only dream is to love and to be loved back
    but i found nothing everyone is giving me their back
    now i'm in this darkness living alone
    and so my heart has turned to stone[/align]

    Written By.Dead||Soul
    which it's my other nickname.......this is my first poem i post in this website
    and i hope so badly that i will find people who'll be interested in my poems better than that website i've been before...if i found aid...i shall stay..as you see my nickname i'm just a strang wonderer..if i found welcome and smile i shall stay..and if not...i will leave..and i wish you all the best people of this website

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    افتراضي

    [align=center]OoOoOoOoOoH
    , This peom broke my heart
    Dead soul
    Thank you so much
    It.s seem to be saddish poem
    It has a simple vocabularies
    and has greatful meaning

    I hope u enjoy ur time with us in our website

    My best wishes

    Fz
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    افتراضي thanx

    thank you FzZ thanx alot....i'm really glad that you liked this poem, though i've always wrote romantic poems..but these days i'm haveing bad times.....thanx for passing here

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    افتراضي

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    Rose

    بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم


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    wooow I'm glad 2 have a poet here with us


    U R welcom & I hope U enjoy with our group



    Try 2 think positive

    BaY



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