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my Loneliness
[align=left]i've wasted my time looking for someone to hold
and before i know it i've became old
i were like a Ghost no body can see me
i was holding a hope to find who'll save me
my heart was tearing apart crying so badly
and my soul has lost inside the sadness ocean the deadly
i kept watching the people with a sad eyes
i kept shedding my tears and raising my head to the skies
looking for an angel who'll save me from my sad life
i've lost my hope and so my desire to stay alive
my only dream is to love and to be loved back
but i found nothing everyone is giving me their back
now i'm in this darkness living alone
and so my heart has turned to stone[/align]
Written By.Dead||Soul
which it's my other nickname.......this is my first poem i post in this website
and i hope so badly that i will find people who'll be interested in my poems better than that website i've been before...if i found aid...i shall stay..as you see my nickname i'm just a strang wonderer..if i found welcome and smile i shall stay..and if not...i will leave..and i wish you all the best people of this website
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[align=center]OoOoOoOoOoH
, This peom broke my heart
Dead soul
Thank you so much
It.s seem to be saddish poem
It has a simple vocabularies
and has greatful meaning
I hope u enjoy ur time with us in our website
My best wishes
Fz[/align]
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thanx
thank you FzZ thanx alot....i'm really glad that you liked this poem, though i've always wrote romantic poems..but these days i'm haveing bad times.....thanx for passing here
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thnkoy
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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
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wooow I'm glad 2 have a poet here with us
U R welcom & I hope U enjoy with our group
Try 2 think positive
BaY
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